The Eye-Dancers is, at its heart, a coming-of-age story for the main characters–Mitchell Brant, Joe Marma, Marc Kuslanski, and Ryan Swinton. Journeying through a strange and distant world, each boy must confront, and overcome, the self-doubts that have always held him back.
In the short story “Jump,” which I wrote approximately one year before beginning The Eye-Dancers, the protagonist must face a similar nagging self-doubt. A strange, unforeseen warning in a supermarket threatens to trip up the plans he’s made after wrestling with his fears and insecurities. Can he learn from the failures of his past and slay the demons that, far too often, have held him back from pursuing his dreams?
I hope you enjoy “Jump.”
“Jump,”
Copyright 2014 by Michael S. Fedison
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The young man with the long black hair stared at Joe.
“You know,” he said, his head tilting to the side, as if he were pondering the mystery of the universe, “you better stay home tomorrow.”
Joe blinked, tried to reorient himself. What was going on? He’d been browsing the boxed desserts in the baking aisle, thinking of a sweet treat he’d enjoy making that evening. A few customers walked by, nothing out of the ordinary. But then this kid—he couldn’t have been more than twenty—had strolled up to him. He didn’t have a shopping cart, and apparently wasn’t here to buy anything.
Joe stood behind his grocery cart, instinctively using it as a buffer. He eyed the products he’d placed in the cart already—too many carbs and sweets, as always—and he felt a mark of shame rise to his cheeks. The kid before him was fit and trim. He probably thought Joe, who was thirty-five pounds overweight and gaining, was a heart attack waiting to happen. Still, that didn’t explain why he’d approached him.
“What are you talking about?” Joe asked. He pushed his cart further down the aisle, hoping the kid might take the hint and leave him alone.
No such luck.
“Look,” the young man said, brushing greasy bangs from his eyes, “just stay home tomorrow, all right? It’s weird. I mean, I get these feelings, man, you know? And when I just spotted you now, I got a feeling. Real strong and clear.”
Oh boy. He was dealing with a nutcase here. Either that or someone with a perverse sense of humor who had too much time on his hands. He wheeled his cart into the next aisle. Chips and soda. Great. As if he needed more junk food in his cupboards. A middle-aged blonde woman sped by, smelling of Chanel no. 5.
“A feeling?” he said. Dumb. Real dumb. Why engage in conversation with this kid?
“Yeah,” the kid said. “Like, I mean . . . I don’t know, you know? Sometimes my feelings aren’t so specific. But this one was powerful, man. Like a punch to the gut. It’s like this. If you leave your house tomorrow, I mean, like, if you even just like step outside, something’ll happen to you. Something bad.”
He stopped, his hands tightly gripping onto the cart handle. Was this more than just a coincidence? Did this kid know Janine? Had he caught word of what Joe intended to do? But that was impossible. He hadn’t told a soul about his plans.
Still, this was too weird. He didn’t need this. He was nervous enough about tomorrow already.
He got moving again, ignoring the kid.
“Hey! Don’t you get it? I’m trying to help you. I’m not getting anything out of telling you this, you know. It’s just, like, I’m trying to warn you, y’know? Just being a good Samaritan, that’s all.”
A young couple stopped their cart a couple of feet away. The man reached for a bag of pretzels, while the woman wrinkled her nose but said nothing.
“If you want to be a good Samaritan, why don’t you just go on your way?” Joe said. He didn’t want to come off as rude, but enough was enough.
The kid shrugged. “Okay. Just remember what I said. About tomorrow. By Sunday, you should be good to go. But tomorrow, man, lock your doors and stay inside.”
With that, he walked away.
The woman who had wrinkled her nose at the pretzels eyed his retreating figure, then looked at Joe.
He almost blurted out, “I don’t know him, don’t look at me!” But he just glanced away and pushed his cart down the aisle.
♣
Joe sat on his couch, looking out the window as darkness fell over the neighborhood. He’d just finished supper, and he had gone all out, just as he’d planned. Lasagna with a zesty marinara sauce and fresh-baked Italian bread, followed by a lemon pound cake for dessert. He felt like he’d gained five pounds since morning. The food did nothing to still his nerves, though.
He wished Janine were here. He could always talk to her, tell her feelings he could never share with anyone else. But she was visiting a sick girlfriend tonight, on the other side of town. Besides . . . she wouldn’t be the one to confide in about this, anyway. He was planning to surprise her, after all. Tomorrow. He sighed, and slunk back into the couch.
The TV was on—a meaningless late-season baseball game, with half the players from both sides having recently been called up from Triple-A. He was hoping for a diversion, he supposed. Something to take his mind off tomorrow, off the troublemaker at the grocery store. But nothing worked.
“You’re such an idiot,” he said aloud, just as the twenty-two-year-old first baseman on the television grounded into an inning-ending double play. “Get over it. That punk doesn’t know you, doesn’t know Janine. It was just a fluke, that’s all. A coincidence.”
Maybe it was, but it nagged him. Why did this have to happen now? Of all the tomorrows in his life, why was he cautioned about this one? The one where he planned on making the boldest, most challenging decision of his life. Was the young man, with his uncanny warning, trying to tell him not to go through with it? Not to take the chance?
“That’s stupid,” he said, just as the last commercial ended and the ballgame started up again. He had wrestled with this decision for months, painstakingly going through the pros and cons, trying to overcome his fears. He had finally built up the courage. How could he let a stranger’s sick sense of humor or pathological need to create a stir get to him like this?
“I guess maybe they were right,” he said. “Those kids. Maybe I’m just chicken. Always hesitating. Always reluctant to take the . . . ”
♣
“ . . . jump! Let’s jump it!”
They were standing at the edge of a gash in the dirt road. It was about three-and-a-half-feet wide. The only way to cross was to jump. To the left, a steep, wooded hillside blocked the way. It would have been nearly impossible to navigate. To the right, the remains of the road abruptly fell away to a rushing stream, which thrashed its way through boulders, pieces of twisted metal, and fallen tree limbs.
“Wow,” Joe said, more to himself than the others. “Look at this.”
The two boys with him shrugged.
“You should’ve seen it last year, just after it happened,” the taller boy, Bobby Hartstock, said. “They cleaned it up since then. This is nothing anymore.”
Joe swallowed, listening to the stream speed along on its course. It was water, the destructive power of water, that had turned this section of road into the impassable mess he saw now. He hadn’t been here when it happened, last fall. His parents had just moved to the area a few weeks ago. But he’d heard the stories. About the storm, the flood, and the road that got washed away. Still, hearing about it and seeing it were two different things.
What they were standing on, in fact, could hardly be classified as a road. The entire right side was gone. This stretch of the road was now a narrow footpath. Bobby and the other kid, Peter Collins, stood next to each other, in front, and Joe stood close behind them. There wasn’t enough room for the three boys to stand together, side by side. If one of them took just a couple of steps to the right, he would fall off the edge. Where the road had been, only a ragged, steeply sloping ravine remained. Rusty outflow pipes jutted out like sawed-off knives. The guardrail, which had once hugged the right side of the road, protecting motorists from the thirty-foot plunge to the fast-flowing, rock-filled stream below, was suspended in midair, hanging there like a dying snake. It was hard for Joe to believe that a real road had been here, just a year ago. It hardly seemed imaginable. The only saving grace was that no homes had been hit. This stretch of road wound through uninhabited forests and meadows. Joe’s new neighbors had told his mom that it had been used as a shortcut before the storm. Residents doubted that the road would ever be repaired. Too much money involved, and not enough justification to fix it.
“So, you wanna see more?” Bobby asked. He had turned around to look at Joe. He and Peter Collins lived a few houses down from him. They had seen him walking alone one evening, and joined him. School had just started, too. And they were his first friends since moving here. He was thankful for that. He didn’t make friends easily, and starting ninth grade in a new town was challenging enough, without the additional pressure of finding people to hang around with.
“I don’t know,” Joe said. “How can we?”
Peter rolled his eyes. “You just gotta jump, that’s all!” He motioned to the gash in the road, the one that blocked their forward progress. It lay there like an open wound. The drop was fifteen, maybe twenty feet. There were small stones mixed with broad-shouldered boulders at the bottom, before they fell away to the right, toward the slope that led to the stream.
“What’s up ahead?” Joe wanted to know.
Bobby smiled. “It’s even better up ahead! The road goes up higher, and the drop to the stream is awesome up there! C’mon. Let’s go.”
Without a moment’s hesitation, Bobby leaped across the gash. Joe closed his eyes, afraid that he might trip or stumble on a small rock, and then fall, headfirst into the hole. But when he dared to look again, all he saw was Bobby standing on the other side, waving for Peter and Joe to follow. Peter did. He made it seem easy, just like jumping over a kid’s dirt hole in the backyard or playing a game of hopscotch in the neighborhood.
Joe walked to the lip of the hole. He knew it was his turn.
Bobby cleared his throat. “Well?”
He looked up, as if trying to garner the courage. A crow flew overhead, cawing loudly, its voice echoing down like an accusation. Joe wished he could sprout wings and follow that crow, over the hillside, clear across to the other side of the valley.
He noticed all the loose rocks, the strewn pebbles and fallen leaves. So many things that might cause him to trip and fall, just as he readied himself to jump. He didn’t want to fall down that hole. If he landed on those boulders, they would—
“C’mon, are you coming or not?” Peter said. “We don’t got all day, Joe.”
“Um.” He knew he couldn’t jump. And he hated himself for it.
“Whatsamatter? You chicken?” It was Bobby. “A little girl could jump that hole, Joe. Don’t be a wuss.”
He started to sweat, then. He could feel his shirt sticking to his skin, despite the late September chill. He was stuck. Found out. There was no place to run.
“Geez, I thought you were different,” Peter said.
Bobby shook his head, and the boys turned to walk away, further up the road. They turned a corner, and were gone. They hadn’t even looked back at him.
“Wait,” he croaked, to the air, to the hardy insects of early fall, the ceaselessly rushing stream below. “Wait.”
But all he did was stand there, stranded, unable to follow, unable to . . .
♣
“ . . . jump. Sometimes, you just have to step out in faith and take a chance, you know, Joe?”
He knew, and he knew she was right. Janine usually was. But how could he make such a commitment? How could he know it would all work out?
They were sitting on her sofa, in the apartment she had rented uptown. It was February, and snow was falling like fluffy popcorn from chalkboard-gray clouds. He had known Janine for over two years now. They met at work. He had been new to the city, didn’t know anyone. She bumped into him, literally, in the narrow hallway that spanned the front of the building. He blushed, stuttered, but, miraculously, she had invited him to join her for lunch. He did. Then he fell in love with her.
But what she was asking of him now . . .
“Look, I know your mom and dad split up.” They had. His first year of college, his mom had called him in his dorm room, crying. Dad had walked out on her. After twenty-five years, he just walked away without an explanation. Joe always thought they were happy together. If his parents couldn’t make it, who could? “But you’re not you’re father, Joe. We’re not them. Or any other couple who’s broken it off. We’re us. Can’t you see that?”
“Yes.” The sofa cushions felt soft on his back, too soft, as though they were trying to suck him in, trap him. He leaned forward.
“Joe, you know I love you.”
He looked at her. The beautiful blue eyes, close to tears. The long brown hair. It amazed him all the time that she could love him. But she did. He never doubted that.
“And you love me, don’t you?”
“Of course I do. But I . . . I need a little more time. I’m just not sure if I can . . .”
She got up then, looked out the window into the white heart of the snow. She stayed like that for minutes. It felt to Joe like hours. Finally, she turned around.
“I don’t want to be with anyone else, Joe, you know that. But I can’t be expected to wait forever. I’m not trying to rush you. I’ll give you more time, if you think you need it. But . . . I won’t wait forever. You know I want to have a family. You know. . . .”
He nodded. He wanted to say something, to comfort her, encourage her with his words. But he didn’t. He couldn’t.
All he could do was get up, walk to her, and take her into his arms. Neither of them said another word, while, outside, silently, ceaselessly, the snow continued to fall.
♣
That had been eight months ago. Janine hadn’t brought the topic up again, but he knew she was thinking about it. There was an expectation about her, a hope, an unspoken pressure she was exerting.
He flicked off the baseball game—it wasn’t helping him to get his mind off himself. It was just background noise, making it hard to think.
This wasn’t just about Janine, or that old wrecked road twenty years ago. All his life he had taken the path of least resistance. Even with his profession. He was an accountant. That’s how he lived his life, too. Always calculating, weighing the debits and credits, wanting things to be sure and safe before daring to step forward.
There was the baseball team in high school. He wanted to try out for the squad. He’d practiced his pitching with his dad every day that spring. But when the time came to sign up, he skulked away. He didn’t want to fail. Didn’t want to make a fool of himself in front of the other players. Besides, maybe he wasn’t even any good.
In college, his English professor had encouraged him to enter his essay on the poetry of John Donne into the Mills Award Contest, which awarded a prize of one hundred dollars to the student who turned in the best written document of the academic year. But Joe never submitted his essay.
There were the girls he liked in school, but never asked out. The friends he would have liked to make, but whom he never approached. The words he had always left unspoken for the people who mattered to him. The opportunities, the chances that had always been there for him, but which he had never taken.
He was tired of it all. Last night, as he lay there in bed, staring up at the ceiling, he had made up his mind.
He would go to the jewelry shop, buy an engagement ring. And then he would go to Janine, look her in the eyes, drop down to one knee, and ask her to marry him. He loved her. And he wasn’t going to throw it all away because he was afraid. He was going to take the jump. Tomorrow.
But then the kid at the grocery store had to come and throw a wrench into things. Was there something to his warning? What did he know? Was Joe making a mistake? Should he reconsider?
“Oh, just shut up!” he yelled. But the thoughts would not stop. They came at warp speed. Don’t leave the house tomorrow! Don’t buy the ring. What if she says no? What if she marries you, but then leaves you for another guy? You’re so boring, she probably will. What if she jilts you at the altar? It’s happened before. Lots of times.
In self-defense, he turned on the baseball game again, just in time to see a pop fly to right field end the inning. Restless, he strolled into the kitchen, poured himself a cup of coffee, took a sip. He knew that sleep was far off. Might as well give himself a jolt of caffeine.
He didn’t even attempt to go to bed. He just half-sat, half-laid down on the couch. At some point, deep in the bowels of the night, he nodded off. When his eyes reopened a short while later, he saw that dawn had arrived. Tomorrow had come. His moment of decision was at hand.
♣
He opened the front door. Sunlight smote him in the face, and he closed his eyes. In his mind he could hear the kid from the store: “If you leave your house tomorrow . . . something’ll happen to you. Something bad.”
Since waking up, he had wrestled further with his decision, hemmed and hawed. In the end, though, he knew he had to go through with it. He wasn’t sure if the kid’s warning was Fate’s way of attempting to hold him back, scare him off. But it didn’t matter. Not anymore. He was through running away.
The threshold was right in front of him. He knew that as soon as he stepped over it, there would be no return. This was a one-way trip.
He was surprised at the unease he felt. He thought, once he had made his mind up, the doubts would pass away. But they hadn’t.
He looked past the threshold, and there, right in front of him, was the old destroyed road, with the three-and-a-half-foot-wide gash. The gash came right up to the threshold. The only way outside would be to jump over it.
He blinked several times, trying to rid himself of the illusion. But it wouldn’t go away. Just the opposite, in fact. Each time he looked, the details of the road became clearer, clearer. The fallen leaves, the pebbles and stones waiting to trip him up, the guardrail off to the side, floating in midair like some broken metallic arm. He could even hear the rushing stream below.
Resigned, he understood. There could be no avoiding it. It had to be this way.
He took a deep breath. Stepped on to the threshold. Looked into the hole, at the boulders and sharp, jagged rocks waiting to cripple him if he should stumble and fall.
For a brief moment, he thought of turning away, retreating into the safe refuge of his home, and closing the door. But he didn’t.
“Here goes nothing,” he said.
He jumped.
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Thanks so much for reading!
–Mike
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